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Moderator Post[MODPOST] May Chapterfy writing contest! Big prizes and other fun stuff!(self.WritingPrompts)
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INTRODUCTION
I'll open with a TL;DR, but you ought to read everything below:
TL;DR: Read the...
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Awesome, thank you very much
You have a few grammar mistakes. It should be "whip us up" not the other way around. There are a few more i saw like missing letters.
I am not too keen on the depressing stories. But I think that you probably wrote the best of what you made of it.
Hahah, I'd like to think the story isn't too awfully depressing. Thanks for the input! Someone else mentioned grammar, I plan on going back and correcting the mistakes as soon as I get the time!
My take on the prompt is that people are getting sucked into google maps like the matrix. They can only exit from where they first used their device. I am not a very talented yet, but I think my ideas can mostly outweigh my lack of experience!
Could you read my other story that I posted called The Criminal and tell me how well I wrote it? The short story is finished to me.
Nice idea, very creative. I definitely can look at it and let you know what I think, but just so you know, I've never done any writing before, except for one other WP which only got one reply, so I'm probably really not very qualified to give any criticism. I can still let you know what I personally think, but take everything I say with a grain of salt. Also, I'm pretty busy today, so it might not be until tomorrow.
Thats fine. I wish i could write more detailed. I have not taken a creative writing class yet. I do my best on very short stories!